When the Place Is a Map, and the Map Is a…

[Larry Hogue]

Looks intriguing!

[Zoe Carada]

Thanks Larry, glad you liked it. Hope you read on, parts 2 and 3. Let me know what you think!

[Jill Ebstein]

You paint a vivid picture even in your measured prose. Here was a line that grabbed me:

I am determinedly against privileges. I am against rights too. It is not rights that I want, but rightness, justice.

[Zoe Carada]

Thanks a lot, Jill!