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I think as a writer you are finding your voice as you share this story. I wonder if Nestor has some redeeming qualities because he doesn't seem like a likable teacher. Asa reader, I can feel Lili's pain.

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Nestor is not supposed to be an easy coach; but he cares, and has a flame. He asks uncomfortable questions. Thanks feedback, Jill, good to know!

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