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Zoe, I really like some of the descriptive writing which is not too much and not too little. It's just right. Here's an example:

Maybe the buzz will go quiet like sand falling to a mound on the bottom of a jar. The jar being you.

The failing meditation, the spent energy, the dead-night visitors all feel very real and to be dreaded. I am hoping you provide us with a way out.

Yes, that's me... always looking for the positive side.

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Oh, Jill, the way out I'm afraid is just trying things out (meditation, music etc.) hoping they work, but if they don't just wait until the body-mind surrenders and drops to sleep. I say that from years of experience :) Thanks for appreciating this piece!

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